It is not the anger in your voice that scares me.
What is rage in the face of infatuation?
though I rage at myself
But these are the things I fear:
the silence in your whisper
the heat of your skin
It is not the arrogance of your smile that disgusts me.
What role does contempt play in lust?
though I feel contempt for myself
But these are the things I loathe:
your effortless charisma
my effortless weakness
It is not the shape of your fist that hurts me.
What can pain tell me that love has not?
though I am in agony
But these things cause me sorrow:
your absence
your vanity
It is not the contours of your face that bind me.
For what is flesh but a fleeting pleasure?
though it is akin to torture
But these are the things I love:
the line of your jaw
the hair on your chest
And these are the things I treasure:
the evil in your eye
the width of your wrist
And these are the things I dream:
the heat of your passion
the ice in your heart
You are imperfect.















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wow!! very nice!!
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like the other one, the language is still quiet delicate and distant like its being whispered but its still dramatic and powerful. (id go on about how its like a geishas dance but i think you'd just get bored)
again really good!
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But a Geisha dance? It is not quite so delicate and lovely yet
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To her fair works did Nature link
The human soul that through me ran;
And much it grieved my heart to think
What man has made of man.
~Wordsworth
yeah, I try to be helpful with comments, but i always mean what i say and you are a very talented writer!
my comments may sound lovely but seriously, you should hear my rants! i spit poison (perfect example~ my journal yesterday! ouch)
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To her fair works did Nature link
The human soul that through me ran;
And much it grieved my heart to think
What man has made of man.
~Wordsworth
Yesterday we went out to get him a new suit and ended up also buying me shoes, a dress, an eyeliner, a wii game and some jewellery. Yay! more stuff to fill my en suite bathroom turned walk-in wardrobe!
I like giving helpful comments not just "great job, go you!" thats usually why my comments end up being long, advice and critique along with insane ramblings. Like this one!
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Who was the first person to look at a cow and say, "I think I'll squeeze these dangly things here and drink what comes out"?
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To her fair works did Nature link
The human soul that through me ran;
And much it grieved my heart to think
What man has made of man.
~Wordsworth
yup, i is good at that, i just give daddy my cute look and call him daddy a lot. Its an art, it really is.
ooh, i got that Mario/sonic olymipics! Its so fun! i seriously play video games waay too much!
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To her fair works did Nature link
The human soul that through me ran;
And much it grieved my heart to think
What man has made of man.
~Wordsworth
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